With 31 lines in this poem, it came as not a surprise that this poem was rather disorganised one. Some lines are quatrains, couplets, triplets and even one-line stanzas. While it does obey the start of a stanza is a another idea rule, this poem has no rhythm when you recite it, and neither does it have a fixed emphasizing pattern, so my conclusion is that it is a free verse. There are no alliteration, however, there are a few imagery like "The whiteness of my shoes" "At times black crows try to interrupt" There are no simile, metaphor, onomatopoeia, personification, idiom. But there is something similar to symbolism in this verse. At times black crows try to interrupt When we sing the National Anthem It is difficult to maintain The whiteness of my shoes Especially on Wednesdays This stanzas may symbolize the "imperfections" of childhood life. Seven to the power of five is unreasonable AND Thecapital of Singapore is Singapore These lines captures the naive tone of the poem. I feel not exactly in the same way as him but I understand a tiny bit of his description of his primary school life. I felt that many things were not necessary and that friends and having fun was the most important... I used to be in 6 Patience Yes, that's a class name One of our weak point is silence Or that's what they claim Teachers here don't last a instance Us they did not tame They were always at absence And we all brought our game! Recess was the only period that everyone adore All my classmates freely chatted Indoor or outdoor Some took this time and rested Woke up feeling sore Especially when disturbed Middle of their snore CCA were annoying That is what I thought Math,robotics and biking This three here I sought I ended up in drawing Also known as art We even tried chiseling My statue was worth naught But there will be one thing I miss And that would be my friends No wonder then I felt amiss I have no girlfriends... Note: I really don't have one. |